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I watch out my window as the rain falls.
Listening to the winds wailing calls.
I sit and stare but there's nothing to see,
My eyes are blocked by a door with no key.
More rain trickles down the glass
And yet another car goes past.
While I sit here and wait for him,
To walk in cold but warm within.
The ringing phone gave me relief.
But the message brought me only grief.
Tears cold and wet just like the rain.
His car had crashed on Cherri lane.
I cry my eyes out in my sorrow
With no ones shoulder for me to borrow.
Since that day I've hated rain.
It always brings me hurt and pain.
He never came, he never will.
But I sit here and wait for him still.
Staring blankly out the window in my home
Sitting. Staring. All Alone.
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Going through all my old papers and found my favorite poem! Wrote this when I was like...in 9th grade. The assignment was write a poem about rain. Mine turned out darker than I first intended.
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~BR0KEN-TYP3-WRIT3R Jan 27, 2012  Student Writer
oh phew! at first i thought something had happened between you and papa. i was about to go kick his ass! i really like this poem, other than minor grade nine errors you did an awesome job. its always more fun to write on the darker side of life ^ ^ its more intriguing and lets your imagination go much, much higher than any other genre of writing.

once again, nice work!
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~WatchaTophat Jan 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No no, I remember someone asking me before if it was true and I was like "No. O_o" What errors? Just curious.
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~BR0KEN-TYP3-WRIT3R Jan 27, 2012  Student Writer
nothing major, just some words that don't quite fit with the poem.
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